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  1. Nancy. Really like how the revisions turned out. The gestures in the character’s body language, the strategic use of color, the switch between close ups and long shots, the varied transitions between panels, and the decreasing narrative–all these really work. I am especially pleased how mood was amplified and tension drawn on in revisions. The cheerful colorful panel at end especially leaves reader feeling happy. Nice work here. (And please share this note with your son!)

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